In-Reply-To: Message from Jari Aalto <jari.aalto@cante.net> of "Fri, 02 Apr 2010 19:55:10 +0300." <87mxxl7q1d.fsf@jondo.cante.net> > I noticed that many of the manual pages are inconsistent with the > perlstyle.pod guidelines. While this may seem like a minor quibble, I > personally think the quality of documentation is visible from the > writing and adhering to the style conventions. > Some issues that I've noticed: > - 3-arg open() command not encouraged widely. There are several reasons for that, some good and some less so. The trick is to know the difference. > - Use of 'or' and 'and' not encouraged widely as a more safe and > readable over the '||' '&&' operators. That's because they aren't. This is a myth. > - Code indentation and placement deviates from manual page to manual > page (there are 1, 2, 3 space etc. indentations) I noticed this on my last past through perlfunc, and wasn't sure how it came about. Probably by accident, I suppose. I'd rather see them as 4, but it may be that you run into problems with your horizontal line lenght on nroffed manpages. > - Keywords are treated like function calls: > if($this and $more) => if ($this) > while($that and $more) => while($that and $more) if ($this && $more) while ($that && $more) > - for-loops do not encourage the use of 'my' variable localizations: > for $var (...) => for my $var (...) Sometimes it gets too busy for the important point to come through. This note suffices: Note: here and in subsequent examples, good style (and the C<use strict> pragma) would dictate that you add a C<my> modifier to declare a new lexically scoped variable, like this: my $diff = abs($first - $second); However, we've omitted C<my> from most of our examples for clarity. Just assume that any such variable was declared earlier. > - Some conditionals could be written easier to the eye by reducing > function call parens. E.g > if (stat$($filename)) Spurious $. > => > if (stat $filename) Perhaps. > Likewise for the variable assignments and simple built-in perl > function calls: > $var = function(arg, arg) > => > $var = function arg, arg; # An example: $str = sprintf "%02d", 1; That's a slippery slope. > - Chunks of code do not have breaks to see where a statement group > starts and where next continues. Like stucking "use", "my", > "while", "if" every statement together above and below. I don't know what that means. You mean not enough vertical whitespace for grouping code chunks? > I've started fixing the the issues, but I would like ask: > - Would all of these be candidates for adjusting? No. > - Can I use perlstyle.pod as the guidelines for changes? Depends on who hacked it last. > - How should I prepare the changes for inclusion? > I've worked through GIT blead repository and have all the patches in > standard format for: > git am *.patch > I could send the patches for each pages in a separate threads? > Let me know how could I be of help to improve the documentation, Any help is better than no help: it should be encouraged and thanked. Thank you, --tomThread Previous | Thread Next